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Cute Rarity

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Sketching and vectoring took about 6 hours, but I took a break to get made fun of playing Amnesia with the guys on Skype, lmao.

Edit 2: Rounded the horn, gave her eye shadow, fixed her hoof, added the notch in her hair, and fixed the lines in her hair and tail! Thanks Kits!

Edit 3: Fixed blush placement, Moved the tail in more, Rounded her ear, and gave her a neck! I also moved her hair up a bit.

SHE'S SO CUTE X_X

Please leave critiques! I want feedback on how to improve :D

Thanks! More ponies incoming!
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Alright. Let's start with what's wrong, so we can end with what's right. I am assuming you are going for show-accuracy here.

Her horn. The tip needs to be more rounded. The front/right side looks curved enough, the right/back side is a little too flat.

Um. Is she not wearing her eyeshadow?

The thick purple line in her hair is supposed to be a gap. See [link] for a decent screenshot (ignore the hugboxing). Still on her mane, the angle it comes out from behind her ear is to large, it needs to be more downwards. I think the down curve starts before her ear. See: [link] as a reference.

Her right-front does not go up as far as her left-front leg. The hooves are shaped differently too.

Last issue: If you take a look at the tail in this reference [link] , you can see TWO lines on the first segment. The lines also diverge as they reach the end of each segment. The lines on the first segment go all the way to her plot.

Now the positive:
The pose is first and foremost CUTE. None of the issues really detract from it all that much.

You NAILED the eye lashes and the eye's in general. I have a terrible time on her eyes. The shading on her hair is a nice effect that adds a WOW factor to the image. Her Cutie mark is nicely detailed. The shape of the right legs is spot on. That sitting pose is very hard for me to draw.

The blush mark and tongue make this at least 20% cuter.

Well that wraps this up! My first critique! Please let me know if you think I'm being a jerk-ass of something.